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Haunted Underground Water Station in Iraq
I spent most of my deployment in Iraq telling myself that the desert couldn’t surprise me anymore. By the time you’ve been on the ground for months, you think you’ve seen every kind of dust storm, every kind of roadside ruin, every shadowy street where something could go wrong. You start to believe the land has no more secrets left to show. But I was wrong. That country had layers, and some of them we were never meant to peel back.
It was 2007, and I was stationed with a small detachment near the outskirts of an abandoned industrial complex north of Baghdad. Most of the structures had been looted years earlier—warehouses stripped down to bare concrete, windows smashed, roofs caved in. Our mission was simple enough: conduct night patrols, keep eyes on potential weapons smuggling routes, and make sure no insurgents were using the complex as a base. It sounded routine, and at first, it was. The place was just another cluster of ruins in a country littered with them.
But there was one building that always caught my eye, even before things went wrong. It sat at the edge of the complex, half-sunk into the earth, its roofline barely visible above the sand. Locals called it “the old water station,” though it hadn’t pumped water in decades. It looked more like a bunker, its concrete scarred and blackened, its entryway sealed with a heavy steel door that someone had welded shut. Every time we passed it, I felt uneasy. There was nothing unusual about a sealed-off building, but the way the air cooled near it, the way birds never landed on it, and the way even stray dogs gave it a wide berth—all of it stuck with me.
One evening, command decided we should check it out. Intel suggested insurgents might have been cutting through the back wall to use the place for storage. Our squad, nine guys led by Sergeant Walker, got the assignment. Nobody was excited. The sun had just gone down, and the desert was cooling fast. You’d think the chill would be welcome after the blistering heat of the day, but the night air carried a dampness that wasn’t normal for that region. Even before we went inside, I noticed condensation forming on my rifle.

We pried open the door with crowbars, sparks flying as the welds snapped. The smell that rolled out was something I still can’t fully describe. It wasn’t just rot or mold, though both were there. It was heavier, chemical and organic all at once, like rust mixed with something that had once been alive. A couple of guys gagged. Walker told us to button it up and move in.
The inside was worse than the outside. Our flashlights cut across walls coated in grime and streaked with water stains. The floor sloped downward, steps leading us deeper underground. I remember running my glove along the wall and coming away with something that wasn’t just dust—it was sticky, almost oily. There were pipes overhead, most of them broken, dripping into rusted puddles. The sound of water echoed strangely, as though the room was larger than our lights revealed.
About fifty feet in, the corridor opened into a chamber. It had once been the main pump room, but whatever machinery had been there was now unrecognizable—metal twisted into shapes that didn’t make sense, like it had melted and hardened in place. Some pieces looked bent by force, others warped as if by heat. The strangest part, though, were the markings on the floor. Not graffiti, not random stains. They were deliberate lines and arcs, drawn in what looked like chalk but glowed faintly when our beams hit them. Walker muttered that it was probably some kind of insurgent ritual or intimidation tactic, but none of us bought that explanation.
We pushed deeper. The chamber had a stairwell leading down again, narrower, and that’s when Ramirez—our youngest guy—pointed out something that stopped us cold. On the wall beside the stairwell was a handprint. Not painted, not carved—pressed into the concrete like clay, fingers splayed wide, too large to be human. The concrete around it was rippled, as though it had softened and hardened again.
Walker tried to keep us moving, but our nerves were shot. The air grew colder the farther down we went, until we could see our breath fogging in our NVGs. That shouldn’t have been possible in Iraq, not in that season. The stairwell ended in another chamber, this one filled with water. A shallow pool spread across the floor, perfectly still despite drips echoing from the pipes above. Our lights reflected off it, too clear, almost like glass.
That’s when we heard the first sound. Not water, not metal shifting, but voices. Faint, overlapping, whispering in English. We froze, rifles up, ears straining. The voices weren’t coming from ahead, though—they were echoing up from the water itself. I leaned closer, against every instinct, and I swear I heard my own name whispered back at me. Not just my name, but my voice, as though I were calling myself from beneath the surface.
Ramirez panicked. He fired a burst into the water, the rounds punching holes and sending ripples across the pool. The voices stopped instantly, but the water began to move on its own. Not from the bullets, not from us—waves rolling outward like something underneath was shifting. Walker pulled us back, cursing, trying to keep us together, but by then it was too late. The chamber was alive with sound—metal groaning, whispers building into a chorus, and the water rising without any source feeding it.
We scrambled for the stairwell, slipping on wet concrete, gear banging against the walls. As we climbed, the lights began to fail, one after another flickering out. In the dark, we heard footsteps on the stairs below us. Heavy, deliberate, not in a hurry. Like something was following, pacing itself, knowing we couldn’t move fast enough.
By the time we reached the first chamber, half the squad was yelling, trying to drown out the noise. My flashlight caught Ramirez just as he turned to look back, and I’ll never forget the expression on his face. His eyes were wide, mouth open, but he wasn’t screaming. He was silent, staring into the dark behind us. Then he was just gone. One second he was there, the next the beam cut past him to nothing but wall. No splash, no fall, no sound.
We bolted. The corridor seemed longer than before, stretching, bending. My chest burned, my legs felt heavy, like I was running through water. Behind me, I heard Walker shouting for us not to break formation, but his voice grew muffled, distant. When we finally burst out into the night, the air hit me so hard I collapsed, sucking in desert wind like it was the first breath I’d ever taken.
We counted heads. Two missing—Ramirez and Carter, a quiet kid from Ohio who’d been covering our rear. Walker wanted to go back, but none of us would follow him. We told command the floor had collapsed, that the two men fell into a sublevel we couldn’t reach. It wasn’t a total lie, but it wasn’t the truth either. The building was sealed the next day with C4, reduced to rubble. Official reports said it was unsafe, structurally compromised.
The nightmares came immediately. For months after, I dreamed of water pooling under my bed, voices whispering from drains, faces watching me from the surface of puddles. When I finally rotated back home, I thought it would stop. But sometimes, late at night, I still hear my own voice calling me from somewhere far below, like the echo hasn’t faded. And when it rains, I catch myself staring into the reflection, half-expecting to see someone else looking back.
War leaves scars in ways you can’t always explain. Some are bullets, some are bombs, and some are the kind of places you were never meant to walk into. That old water station in Iraq wasn’t just abandoned—it was waiting. And whatever was down there in the dark, I don’t think it was done with us.
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