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Echoes at Observation Post Echo
The rain had been falling steadily for three days when Corporal Davis arrived at Observation Post Echo, a lonely station nestled deep in the foothills of the Hindu Kush. The air hung thick with damp cold, the kind that seeped through uniforms and into the joints. A mist lingered low over the rocky terrain, clinging to the remnants of a Soviet-era outpost that NATO had repurposed into a forward listening post. Davis was the newest addition to a small four-man team assigned to monitor communications traffic from across the border. It was supposed to be a quiet post, the kind of assignment handed to soldiers nearing the end of their tour, far removed from the frontlines.
The post itself was little more than a rusting radio shack surrounded by ancient sandbags and a pair of floodlights that barely cut through the fog. Inside, the bunker smelled of mildew, canned meat, and unwashed uniforms. Sergeant Holloway, a career soldier with a lined face and quiet demeanor, greeted Davis with a handshake and a nod before returning to the radio station. The other two, Private Langley and Specialist Ortiz, barely looked up from their card game. The boredom here was palpable, thick as the mist outside.
The first few days passed uneventfully. Davis settled into the rhythm—hourly radio checks, rotating shifts watching the monitors, and short-range patrols that felt more like walks through haunted ruins than security sweeps. The only sound that broke the monotony was the endless hiss of static and the occasional crackle of distant chatter from radios that seemed more alive at night. That’s when the atmosphere began to change.
It started with Ortiz. One night, around 0200 hours, he burst into the shack pale and shaking. He’d gone out to check the perimeter and came back mumbling about a figure near the northern ridge. Said it was a woman, barefoot, dressed in some kind of white gown. Holloway dismissed it—locals sometimes wandered too close, and the fog played tricks on the eyes. But Ortiz insisted. “She was watching,” he kept saying, his voice unsteady. “She was smiling like she knew me.”

The next night, Davis took the same patrol route. He wasn’t superstitious, but he felt something shift when he passed the old Soviet fuel depot, now a crumbling pile of rust and rebar. The air grew colder. The mist thicker. The silence, too perfect. Then he heard it—a soft rustling, as if someone walked barefoot over gravel behind him. When he turned, there was nothing. Still, the sensation of being observed lingered, gnawing at the edges of his nerves.
By the end of the week, Ortiz refused to go outside. He claimed she was standing at the tree line every night, just beyond the reach of the floodlights. Holloway grew irritated with the paranoia, but even Langley, the most level-headed of them all, admitted to hearing footsteps outside while on watch. “Like someone circling the shack,” he said. “Never gets closer. Just… watching.”
Davis began to have dreams. They were vivid, strange, and all centered around the same theme—a woman in white, with dark, wet hair hanging over her shoulders, standing silently by the window of the bunker, her eyes locked onto his. In the dreams, she never spoke, never moved, just stared. Sometimes he’d wake up drenched in sweat, heart pounding, convinced someone had just whispered his name.
Then came the night the radio picked up the voice.
It was during Davis’s shift. He was dozing slightly at the desk when the static cracked, and a soft female voice drifted through. At first, it was a whisper, unintelligible, like a hum in a forgotten language. Then it grew clearer, unmistakably a woman’s voice, saying his name—slowly, deliberately, almost affectionately.
He called Holloway over. They replayed the segment, but the voice was gone. All that remained was static. Holloway stared at him for a long moment before turning back to his bunk, saying nothing.
That night, Ortiz vanished.
The team had gone to bed, leaving Davis on the late shift. When Langley woke up for his patrol, Ortiz’s bunk was empty. His gear was untouched, rifle still leaning against the wall. They searched the surrounding area until morning, but found no tracks in the mud, no signs of struggle. It was as if he had stepped outside and evaporated into the fog.
Command was notified, but due to weather and terrain, they couldn’t send a bird for extraction or support for another 48 hours. Holloway ordered full security protocol—no one leaves the bunker alone, all watches doubled. But Davis could see the doubt in the sergeant’s eyes. Something unnatural had crept into their small world, and no manual prepared them for this.
The following evening, Holloway posted himself outside with his rifle, determined to face whatever had taken Ortiz. The others stayed inside, silent, listening. The radio remained off. At some point around midnight, Davis heard the sergeant muttering. Not over the radio—just outside the window, his voice low and dreamlike. Langley looked at Davis and quietly unlatched his sidearm.
When they finally stepped outside to check, Holloway was gone. His footprints led to the edge of the tree line and stopped. No blood. No broken branches. Just an eerie, unnatural stillness.
Davis and Langley sealed the door and barricaded themselves inside. The fog was thicker now, pressed against the windows like a living thing. In the early hours, the lights flickered and the temperature dropped. That’s when they saw her.
She stood just beyond the glass—barefoot, the hem of her white dress soaked in mud, dark hair matted over her face. But her eyes were visible—wide, unblinking, and focused solely on them. Langley raised his rifle and fired. The glass spider-webbed with cracks, but the bullet passed cleanly through the fog. When they looked again, she was gone.
Langley broke down the next day. He spoke of hearing Ortiz whispering from the vents, saying he was “with her now,” and it was peaceful. He claimed the woman called to him in his sleep, promising warmth, relief from the fear. That night, Davis woke to find Langley gone and the bunker door wide open, swinging in the wind.
He lasted alone for two more nights. The radio was dead. The power flickered on and off. Every shadow looked like it might move. He stopped sleeping. On the final night, he saw her again—this time inside, crouched at the foot of his cot, smiling. Not malevolently, but with a soft, haunting sadness. She reached out a hand, fingers pale and damp, but he couldn’t move. Couldn’t scream. She leaned in close, her breath cold on his neck, and whispered something he couldn’t understand before vanishing into the air.
When the rescue team arrived, they found Davis catatonic, curled in a corner, eyes wide and bloodshot. The bunker was untouched. No signs of struggle. No tracks in the mud. Just three missing men and one survivor who never spoke of what happened, not even during the debrief. He was discharged six months later, medically unfit for duty.
Observation Post Echo was abandoned. Official reports cited mental fatigue, isolation stress, and environmental hazards. But the locals who lived at the edge of the valley had their own explanations. They spoke of an old spirit that wandered the hills—a woman drowned in a mountain flood decades ago, who called to the lonely, the sorrowful, and the weak-hearted. She never screamed. She never ran. She simply waited, night after night, until someone looked long enough to follow.
And they always followed.
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